UX Writing Portfolio

Noah McLaren

Rules
to
WRITE
by 

Listen first

Write for the user

Keep it human

Serve the team

Case Study:
Product Description

If you can, say less.

Original

My Edit

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I edited one other screen on this website. View them both in Figma.

Case Study:
The Fictional "Handshake App"

The final project for UX Writing Fundamentals involves an app called "Handshake". It's a pay app designed to help contractors and business owners interact.

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In the original assignment we were asked not to change the design too much. Treat it like someone's work! Leave notes for a design review.

Now that the course is over I'm giving the app another overhaul. I'm currently working toward:

Reduced cognitive load

Adding missing functions

Improved accessibility

Business owner landing page

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Contractor landing page

Contractor Dashboard

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Contractor Progress screen

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View the whole project, including a before-and-after, on Figma.

View my completed style guide for Handshake.

Case Study:
Some User Feedback Of My Own

One day I ordered lunch from a local restaurant using an app they’d recently launched. Much of the app was easy to use, even fun, but the end of the flow was a little rough.

Original

My Edit

High priority: The confirmation text message needs to be rewritten to include some missing critical information.

Lower priority: The style guide needs some work, particularly on use of punctuation. 

You can view my detailed critique on Figma.

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